When translucent smiles change for more
than those who think a lingering question,
and broken ice has no warning
but an always red morning.
Perhaps a prisoner of bleeding brilliance,
not blue fools, and yet is onto something.
Would they ask the vast, glass cloud
to open and listen
and embrace their pictures of poetry?
The One said,
"If you let My joy, the rhythm and color of an ocean,
pierce your decaying heart,
worry will melt and you will live in eternity with Me."
That's the second poem i've made on magneticpoetry.com :) it's fun!
Tell me what you think it means!
have an uber-awesome day! (or what's left of it...)
signing off
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flo on the go
8 comments:
i have no idea. quess what i have no school today and tomorrow. woohoo!:)
yay! why?
you should cooome oooveeeer... but we don't have any time tomorrow... i'll see you at YG :)
anybody else have any idea?
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*cricket*
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or not...
because of a conference thing. hey today you should try to talk my mo into letting me have a blog with you. talk to me today and i'll talk to you toaday as well. at youth group. is that funny and confusing at the same time to you?
if it is i'll explain again... JUST KIDING. What did you mean when you said "anybody else have any idea"? anyways whats new with you? i'm multitasking, talking to you on the computer and watch this show called Full House. have you heard of it or seen it? ttyl! :)
you need to check some other things that you blogged and check the comments
haha u talk to much ;D
...jkkkkkkk...
i meant if anyone else who *doesn't* look at my blog had any idea of what the poem was about... yeeeah...
oooh
well, i think it's sort of about someone who doesn't know God and they're wondering what it is they need ("a lingering question"). and "yet is onto something" means that they are starting to see God and "would they ask the vast glass cloud (God) to ... listen and embrace their pictures of poetry" is asking if they would just ask God to come into their lives and to "embrace", basically, them in their lives. and then God says if they would let and asked God do that, embrace their lives, that He will, and they can "live in eternity" with Him.
and that's the explanation.
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